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Lundyn Parker's greatest adventures - by JonD

 
Lundyn Parker and his best mate Roscoe Tanner are a couple of Aussie knock about types. During their incredible adventures they will, fight, root, eat and save society and the even the world from horrors unimiaginable. Loveable rogues but as tough as the land that bred them.

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June 19th 2007 08:54
Lundyn and Ann watched from their ship. As soon as the water was released it had gained height and from a new position, three hundred metres in the air they watch fascinated as the RIB headed toward the mouth of a small creek on the mainland. At top speed it ploughed across a small sand bar and came to a halt. The engines were whining as at full speed they tried to push the RIB. But without any water the RIB was motionless. The engines roared and started to cough as they gathered rough sand in through their water intake. Smoke curled from the exhausts as they slowly heated up and then died as the metal overheated and the pistons jammed in their sleeves. A rough hissing woke Ramid. It was the noise of the exhausted engines, metal twisting and cooling. He looked around and saw land just a short swim away. He also noted the dirigible just out of gunfire reach. He grabbed a couple of water bottles and both his carbines. He made for the water, he would fight to the end, but now he could still escape.


Lundyn and Ann were astounded when suddenly with a huge eruption of sand and water a creature whose ancestry went back three million years emerged from the flurry. It had gripped Ramid around the lower half of his body. Engulfed by the jaws of a huge saltwater crocodile Ramid could feel himself being dragged into the water. The foul breath of the creature filled his nostrils as fear gripped his heart. His bowels opened and his member came rigid unwillingly as he was dragged to his doom. He fired off a full magazine into the back of his captor but to no avail. The armour of the crocs skin was hardly dented. As the crocodile reached deeper water it began its death roll. Rolling over and over with its prey till it was finally subdued, drowned it meal. Not having a good chewing action with its mouth this was how it killed its prey. Once dead the prey was pushed into an underwater ‘larder’ where it softened with the water over a period of weeks so the croc could come back and rip off pieces of the carcass at leisure.


That was the end of Ramid Ben-Artim. Ann had managed to secure footage of his death from the tapes of Mother Belle and these were shown around the world on television, news reels and news magazines. A violent end, for a violent man.

The End.

(Watch for Lundyn’s Next adventure coming soon.)
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